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ode to the teenager |
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Rachel_A Member
since 1999-11-30
Posts 70North Webster, IN USA |
when i am gone i celebrate myself, whom i have fought i choose to not choose my own fate as long as i do not get caught for as reason unknown i seem to feel best each time i put my morals to rest. if in the long run i will feel pain then pain is not healed with time so if for now, it is keeping me sane i believe no pain could be mine who is to say if i'm right or i'm wrong all i am doing is singing the world's song. [This message has been edited by Rachel_A (edited 12-10-1999).] |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
we all make our own choices, at the risk of being hypocritical just look at this from all angles... |
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Rachel_A Member
since 1999-11-30
Posts 70North Webster, IN USA |
Kevin....I don't quite understand what you mean...could you elaborate?? thanks  |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
If i understand you peom your talking about "substance abuse" or whatever you want to call it maybe i missed the point entirely and it sounds like youve made rational reasons for it.... i guess i was just asking to reconsider... or i could have inturpreted this completely wrong |
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Rachel_A Member
since 1999-11-30
Posts 70North Webster, IN USA |
kevin~~i wrote this when i was 17. the only thing i had done at that time was drink a few times, no other drugs or anything. i wrote this at a time in my life when i was struggling with the rights and wrongs in my life, you know? and i think that's how a lot of teens feel~~the whole 'should i be bad or good?' type of thing. it wasn't quite as serious as you took it, but thank you for your opinion! |
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