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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
I thought it was over A new ultimate low everyday From your fresh cold shoulder What else was left to say? Apologies not taken Forgiveness not given Two hearts brutally forsaken But now its time to awaken I thought my life had ended The hand I held had let go… My heart was left unattended and here I was all alone… Rivers of tears flowin’ Oceans of silence roarin’ Lake of Love...frozen But a brighter path was chosen Now I think my life is just beginning I hold my own hand in times of need My heart has found new meaning And the scars you left have healed and when my own hand seems to small and I’m read to give and fall and I can’t seem to stand up tall I know there will always be someone there to call. 11.29.99 ------------------ Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Sometimes self dependance is wonderful, other times its dangerous, but your confidence, and self gratification is wonderful =) more power to you |
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Misty Member
since 1999-08-01
Posts 121USA |
I LOVED THIS POEM, it's smooth, it flows so smoothly, it's easy to read and it had great emotion with and careful though into each sentence! I could tell that this poem means alot to you, you expressed it well! Sorry for you loss! Keep posting these great poems! -Misty ------------------ ©Misty For more Poems bye Misty GO TO: http://www.geocities.com/Paris/Arc/1644 "You died a failure because you never tried!" |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
thank you!! i really appreciate your comments.. i dont post much.. so im glad you guyz could take the time to read and give me feedback.. thanx again!  ------------------ Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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