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Stephani Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 32massachusetts~usa |
My baby's back in town from Spain Everything's gone great all day Then we went down this road tonight And everything cam back to me The spot where I was betrayed by he Trying to hold my angerness aside It instead flowed through my veins inside Becoming heated I tried to beat it So I dozed off in the back seat Now at home on the computer I am tired inside and out, including me feet We both shall soon retire in bed But it's all still in my head There's one question I ask myself Is this all good for my health? To be so mad So depressed And sad Over this boy Who ONLY sometimes brings me joy But then I think today was so nice And I don't want to break the ice Today's the first day in a long long time Where neither of us crossed the fighting line ~~~~~****To understand this please read the otehr confusing words I wrote last night before replying..thank you!  ****~~~~~------------------ ***Stephani*** |
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Erin123 Junior Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 13Chicago, IL |
wow, you really seem to be influenced by the things that happen between you and this boy. i was just wondering, but how old are you exactly? it's simply that you come off as having very mature feelings for this person. anyways, it's a very emotional poem, and that is what poetry is all about- expressing what you feel. nice job, i hope everthing works out. |
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