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Feel My Pain!! (Edited)
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Feel My Pain!! (Edited) |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
It’s kind of hard for me to express the way I feel I wish everybody would just stay real, Cause they don’t know the deal they don’t know dean for real I wish people could just feel me not rob me of my thoughts damn people be ticking at me just like clocks I wish it would rain so It could wash away all this pain that haunts me each and everyday I wish this pain wouldn’t stay I wish that it would just go away I know I ain’t perfect but I would like to try unlike the rest of the world built on lies I remember saying momma where’s daddy at momma I hate it when look at me like that it was something in her eyes that told me daddy wasn’t coming home for a long time little did me the son know that his dad almost died I try to live my life day bye day and ignore the rest but it’s screwed up cause I can feel life more then I can feel death stuffs crazy sometime I wish my momma never made me some people say D share your self with me I say it’s just not that easy if you want to experience something more then just thoughts and talk you have to walk my walk feel my thoughts and you gota hit me in the right spot so girls when you see dean in the halls walk up to him and give a hug cause you know he ain’t a thug all he wants is some true love. Cause why waste the track Deano's better then all of that I think if anybody else was to feel my pain they would go insane sometimes I wonder how Iv maintained over the years Iv seen many people close to me shed many tears this pain and sorrow I speak of is burnt in to my sole I never knew my life would take this toll. My pain is deep and will never leave my soul. I need love I need to find that true white dove from the beautiful stars above somebody that can show me true love. I be like Simon and mylow on a quest for true love but is it to tuff. I will keep on trying to reunite my soul with the other half that has been missing for quite sometime I hope some day it will fully be mine. [This message has been edited by Dean (edited 11-25-1999).] |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Thankyou very much Dean.  This is a much cleaner version and I appreciate that. Welcome to Passions! I can feel your pain through this. Well done.One more thing though. Multiple postings are frowned upon here. We have limited disk space. I read this in OP#4 already. We would appreciate you choosing to post a poem in one forum. You do not have to just only in this one but please post a poem only once. Thankyou. |
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Angela Durham Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 10Az |
this poem is very very touching. i now how it is not to have a father figure in your life. and i think that you have a good talent in writing. !idgie! |
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