Will I Ever?? (please tell me what you think)

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Teen Poetry #2

Will I Ever?? (please tell me what you think)

pop_tart14
Junior Member

since 1999-11-22

Posts 12
North Dakota, USA

0 posted 1999-11-23 06:43 PM

Lost...
In a world of darkness.
Pounding, pushing, looking for a way out.
The people.
The attacks.
The emotions.
The anger.
The damn world.
What is going on here?
Will I ever see the light?
The light that shall help me?
Show me where to go.
Guide me into the world of happiness.
Out of this terrorizing hell.
Will I ever??

foxy_16
Junior Member

since 1999-11-21

Posts 31
Lake Lillian, MN, USA

1 posted 1999-11-23 07:32 PM

you chose excellent words in this poem! it is very good- keep it up!

~Kayla~

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 1999-11-23 09:00 PM

Welcome to Passions Amanda. Thankyou for responding to my introduction and for telling us a little about yourself. I hope you enjoy our little family.

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