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| Teen Poetry #2 |
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How Do I Know? |
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foxy_16 Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 31Lake Lillian, MN, USA |
This is a poem i wrote that i don't know how i came up with- it just expresses how lost i feel because i don't know what direction to take right now. I want to tell him i love him- but will it ruin it? I have yet to find out... This feels real But how do I know I felt it before But look how that turned out I want to tell you But I can't Because I'm afraid That if I admit it I'm going to get hurt God, I need something Just a single hint To tell me what I should do I don't want to feel any pain I want you to know how I feel Please just one sign.... Help me. |
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Natalie Guerrero New Member
since 1999-11-22
Posts 9 |
I thought this was such a great poem. I can really relate to it. Keep up the good writing and I look forward to seeing more of your work. |
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Carrie Junior Member
since 1999-11-18
Posts 11lithia springs,GA,USA |
I can relate to your poem also. I know how it feels and I am in this situation right now. So I have no answers but I can tell you that your poem is GOOD! I have asked for God to help me too. But I have not received an answer. Well maybe I have but just have not figured it out yet! G/G Carrie |
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