I gripped her hand (repost... I think)

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I gripped her hand (repost... I think)

Master
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since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-11-20 04:54 PM

I gripped her hand as if it was a cross
She tempted me into her wicked web
And as we sneaked inside upon our toes
The ground shook from every step

Just as the locks await their fitting keys
My stainless heart awaited her embrace
She kissed me once with autumn’s breeze
Then, disappeared without a trace

Came winter... windows froze with ice
And ashen snow fell on the surface
And in my dreams I sought her eyes
Like every key that seeks its purpose

kari
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since 1999-10-03

Posts 104
Hyde Park, Ut, USA

1 posted 1999-11-20 05:44 PM

This is very well written. I like your choice of words.

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 1999-11-20 05:56 PM

Well done Master...always a pleasure to read you.

Master
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since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

3 posted 1999-11-20 08:40 PM

Thank you!

Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

4 posted 1999-11-20 08:57 PM

The last two lines were very beautiful. Nicely done.

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Master
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since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

5 posted 1999-11-20 09:08 PM

Thank you Amy!

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

6 posted 1999-11-21 12:40 PM

Wonderful work Master! I enjoyed this.

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*Krista Knutson*

"If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie beside you as you dream....." ~Faith Hill: If My Heart Had Wings~

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