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Angela16
Junior Member

since 1999-11-19

Posts 37
USA

0 posted 1999-11-19 07:18 PM

We hurt each other and I don't know why
we always have to make each other cry.
Why can't we just say good-bye,
Because my cheeks are stained from tears when I'm not with you.
why do we do the things we do?
Am I really in love with you?
This love is for a useless body and not for a soul.
My mind says I love you,
But my heart says I'm a fool.

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Angela

[This message has been edited by Angela16 (edited 11-19-1999).]

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-11-19 08:10 PM

This is a very sad poem, and I can see where you are coming from. Nice work.

Welcome to Passions! Your work is appreciated here, as are your replies. In Teen poetry, there seems to be a problem with people not replying much sometimes, so PLEASE reply to others work. You will be read more as a result. Thanks!

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.

x96kxrkgrl
Junior Member

since 1999-11-18

Posts 11
Marion, Ohio, US

2 posted 1999-11-19 08:32 PM

I agree. I know where you are comming from too. I dont see why when couples break up that they drag the whole ordeal out so far. It just makes the breaking up process sooo much harder.

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~Melissa~

Carrie
Junior Member

since 1999-11-18

Posts 11
lithia springs,GA,USA

3 posted 1999-11-20 06:49 PM

I think this is a GREAT poem. I understand how you feel. I feel the same way. I am trying to face the truth but that seems so hard to do. Well keep up the good work!

Litzie
Junior Member

since 1999-11-14

Posts 12

4 posted 1999-11-20 07:58 PM

I totally understand what you are saying...thats totally how I felt with my ex boyfriend...I felt this need to be with him even though we kept hurting each other...good luck, I hope you work it out

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life is like a box of chocholates...it all tastes so good!

Erynn Griffin
Junior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 27
San Angelo, TX United States

6 posted 1999-11-20 08:05 PM

great poem i just got out of a realtionship and i have been crying for the past 5 days now it is a miserable lonely feeling keep up the great work...

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