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Forgiveness
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Forgiveness |
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Carrie Junior Member
since 1999-11-18
Posts 11lithia springs,GA,USA |
Forgiveness that takes a lot of courage It takes a great amount of fear To forgive someone you love In hope they won't do it again But in this case have no worries My love for you is here I didn't mean to break your heart I did it out of fear My fear that oneday I will lose you That my heart would shatter like glass That oneday I would not have you and someone else would get the chance But now I see that I was wrong and that my mind can play tricks But I fear it is too late That my heart has great fear I am balancing on a line that has all of a sudden disappeared. |
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April Resi Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119Alabama |
This is a position we are put in constantly-- I kinda stumbled over a few lines...but can be easily fixed...I like the poem a lot tho ... it's very true!!! April |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
i know what you're feeling and you did a great job expressing yourself keep up the good work ------------------ Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I understand fear, but we need to love freely and accept what we receive in return. I love one that I may never be with (in the sense you are talking). I will always be here for him and we will always be a part of eachothers lives. That is what is important. The caring, giving freely and truely of yourself. |
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Carrie Junior Member
since 1999-11-18
Posts 11lithia springs,GA,USA |
I thank all of you for taking the time to read my poem. Hopefully you will see more of what I love to do. Poems express what lies in your heart and soul. |
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