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ILoveSrfrs Member
since 1999-11-14
Posts 69California |
How could you break it? It was so strong with super-glue It seemed like there wasn't anything That anyone could do Could do to melt the steel That was keeping it together But it started melting When you said we were forever How did you break my heart When I was so strong inside? And you broke it more and more Everytime you lied It was shattered, broken beyond repair And that sad part is that no one, especially you, seemed to care You left me all alone Broken heart in hand Now so weak inside that I could hardly stand Stand the pain inside of me That was tearing me apart It was once held with super-glue Now it's just a broken heart |
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Bright Melody Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 37O'Fallon Illinois |
I can relate. I know exactly how you feel. If you are still in this situation I suggest you try to break free. ------------------ Never frown because you never know who is falling in love with your smile. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
**sigh** so sad......very nice poem though. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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SweetStuff27 Junior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 10LA, California, USA |
I think it is about a girl with a broken heart, but you never specisically stated what was going on in this persons life. You only wrote about how she thought she was strong adn how no one cared about her. |
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ILoveSrfrs Member
since 1999-11-14
Posts 69California |
To Sweetstuff, This poem wasn't about what was going on in her life...it was just about what that person was feeling. |
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