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Peter Hang New Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 7Alma MI, USA |
When no one is near I want to dry your eyes Wipe away all those tears And be the one to make sure you don't cry When you have no one at all I want to do it all To make sure you don't fall If life throws you against the wall When there is no one around And there is no sound I want to be the clown Because I never wnat to see you with a frown When everyone kicks you into the isle I would want to stay for a while I'd go the extra mile To make sure that you smile When you cant take no more I want to open the door Even if you make my heart sore I'll still love you more [This message has been edited by Peter Hang (edited 11-12-1999).] [This message has been edited by Peter Hang (edited 11-12-1999).] |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
this was beautiful great job ------------------ Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
This poem speaks to me of you being there only when no one else will be. What about the rest of the time? How about this.... I want to dry your eyes Wipe away all those tears And be the one to make sure you don't cry Even when no one is near. I want to do it all To make sure you don't fall If life throws you against the wall When you think you have no one at all That sort of thing. I hope I did not offend.  |
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