|Teen Poetry #2|
since 1999-11-23Posts 120
The face of a fallen angel,
her breath has become quite still.
Tears flow from her face,
sick of lifes unbearable taste.
A world not ment for the innocent,
a world that is all to ignorant.
She slips away into a world blanketed with peace,
now she can be relieved,
she is deceased.
"Live to love or why live at all"
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since 2000-06-04Posts 147
Hilton Head, SC, USA
i like it, short, yet alot of feeling, gets to the point, gets you into the feeling of it, and then its done
since 2000-05-31Posts 932
I love the way you use so much passion in your words. sounds to me like you chose them carefully! Job well done!! Congradulations! Keep it up!! Love Always ~*~Jessica~*~
since 1999-06-16Posts 3850
In the space between moments
Very powerful with great imagery! Good job, keep it up!
"Thought is real, physical is the illusion..." Albert from ~What Dreams May Come~
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