Teen Poetry #2 |
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So Many Nights |
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Brom Junior Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 16 |
So Many Nights So many nights I have dreamt. Of holding you in my arms. Resting your head on my shoulder. So many nights I have dreamt. Of looking into your eyes. And telling you how much I love you. So many nights I have dreamt. Of kissing your lips. As I run my hand thru your hair. So many nights I have dreamt. Of feeling you breathe on my skin. As we lay next to each other. So many nights I have dreamt. Of the day you would be mine. So I would no longer have to dream. |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
I like the way you repeat the theme line, but follow it with a new elaboration in each stanza... I really like the last line...very catchy. Jeremy Halstead |
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Brom Junior Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 16 |
Thank you Jeremy. When I find more of my poems, they will surely be posted. ![]() Love will be the end of us... |
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