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Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

0 posted 2000-06-06 04:14 AM

Anyone who has ever sat and wondered when the longing and frustration of being alone will end...take heart in this gives us all hope and it's true.

One Night

The theories, confusion, anxt, and time
spent on feeling lost
are banished by the knowledge now;
for pain is not hte cost.
Time is the matter and in a matter of that,
I'll come to find the end.
I'll find trust in wha I see,
and doubt not what it sends.
The first day of the rest of my life-
the time will be my right
to begin a journry with the one
I that I will find one nigth.
Straight from nowhere, in the flesh,
she'll be standing there.
Without a warning or doubt the same
the message will be clear.

Jeremy D. Halstead


© Copyright 2000 Jeremy D. Halstead - All Rights Reserved
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228

1 posted 2000-06-06 07:53 AM

Jeremy --
I like this one -- it's the idea that even though we may be alone for now, that there's hope out in this big bad world. I like it!!


 "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive.
Because when you love someone you control their version
of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them
autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact,
not their true situation at all."

It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence.

Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen.
I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits.

Matchstick McGee
Junior Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 26
Austin, Texas
2 posted 2000-06-06 04:06 PM

What can I say? "Hope poems" always get to me. This is a great one and I hope it comes true for all of us.


Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
3 posted 2000-06-06 06:07 PM

I love this poem Jeremy! Just when I thought there was no hope, you came along! LoL I'n glad to see one of us has hope and faith in love! Keep up the writing! I love your poems! Love Always~*~Jess~*~
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