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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A 
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Silence These moments grab me by the throat. The moments when I start to choke. Something's swarming in my head. I try to speak, but gasp instead. Webs of emotion twirling aroud inside my head are somehow bound. Solitude seeps out from my heart. But my heart and mouth are far apart. This person sitting across from me wouldn't care to hear or see the many plains of pain I know from the death inside I can not show. Jeremy Halstead |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
wow~ I know how you feel! The person sitting across from me cou;d probably care less. maybe the person sitting across from you doesn't know maybe you should tell them! Good Luck and keep up the wonderful writing! Love Always ~*~Jessica Lynn~*~ |
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ILoveSrfrs Member
since 1999-11-14
Posts 69California |
You did a beautiful job on this one, I know how you feel... "But my heart and mouth are far apart" <-- thats my favorite part...keep up the great writing. marissa |
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Nutmeg1093 New Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 4Cloquet, MN |
It's just one of those things where you have the perfect thing to say, but then it somehow gets trapped inside of you. I hate that feeling!! Or, sometimes, we know how we feel, but it's impossible to put into words. Nice Poem!! |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
I have to agree beautiful work and well said. I would say more but i would be repeating what everyone else has said so i guess you know my opinion. Keep up the work. Jeanna  "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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