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Lindsay Kaznowski Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 23 |
...Him... A glance or two at me... Was all hat I could see... For this forbidden feeling... Was blinding me... I was so terribly sad... When they told me he was bad... But, I saw deeper then that... I loved him more then my own dad... It truly broke my heart... And tore my soul apart... When I saw her grasp his hand... Her name was "dart"... And she played around with all mens heart... So I strongly walked away... Then came that fair day... When I finally got my way... And he confessed his love to me... My heavy heart grew light and bay... And I felt as if I'd flout away... I guess love is stronger then pain... And that ugly devil will never rain... For, if I shared my feelings sooner... Then I would have never felt that weeping pain... -Princess |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
"I guess love is stronger then pain... And that ugly devil will never rain..." I liked that part very much, great poem. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Lindsay Kaznowski Junior Member
since 2000-05-27
Posts 23 |
Lucius~ I'm really glad you liked my poem, Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me. -Princess (Linds) |
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mickel2995 Junior Member
since 2000-05-24
Posts 48 |
This was really, good, keep writing! |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
I love this poem, it is wonderful. If you need to talk, you know where to find me. Nice name! I'm Lindsay too. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Love is a trying thing, but you just have to keep your head up. As you say, "Love is stronger than pain", and it's true. Keep up the good work! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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MrHat Junior Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 34Gilroy, Ca |
I really liked this poem. This is partly true about me. Except I dont yet know the outcome. Keep Writing...You're good at it. "Some people react physically to the magic of poetry, to the moments, that is, of authentic revelation, of the communication, the sharing, at its highest level....A good poem is a contribution to reality. The world is never the same once a good poem has been added to it. A good poem helps to change the shape and significance of the universe, helps to extend everyone's knowledge of himself and the world around him." -Dylan Thomas (1913-1953) |
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