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Im Sick of Being Sorry!!
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Im Sick of Being Sorry!! |
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KiLeZ New Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 8 |
--wooo i just got in a fight w/ my "so-called" bestfriend and i was mad so i just wrote this 5 mins ago... **IM SICK OF BEING SORRY!!** Why is it always my fault? I ALWAYS catch the blame. Even if YOU hurt ME.. You act like this is all a game. Why am I never good enough? what I say is never good enough for you. you constantly make fun of what i say, we're supposed to be bestfriends, but i say we're through. I'm so sick of this, I deserve someone better, who doesn't treat me like krap, someone who will let me borrow a sweater. Some nites i cry, i cry myself to sleep. i just cant realize that you're such a creep. I'll never know why I trusted you i trusted you with my all, my everything, when you just set me up to fall. I'll find a true friend, one that respects me, and i hope you're jealous, cause we'll be so close, you just wait and see. |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Give it till morning and I will bet you will be writing a new poem. Such hatred of such a best friend never lasts beleive me. Great poem though, you really expressed what you were feeling right then, and thats what I love in poetry. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Raw emotion is the best fuel that you use in poetry and you have used it well.  This piece illustrates your anger and frustration. Give it time and you both will come around and laugh at why you were fighting in the first place. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Hehe, this reminds me when...(oh, no not a flashback!!!, run!!!) me and my bestfriend would be walking somewhere and fighting. One of us would go to the opposite side of the street. After about 5 min, one of us would shout "Hey *, you wanna spend the night?" which to the other would say, "Alright". Ok back to the gloomy and somewhat depressing present, Yeah, great poem, give the sucker another chance though... ---------------------- Spreading insanity, one post at a time |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
I've had many fights with friends and yes as everyone said, they do not last one bit. But sometimes it's the fights and the sorrow that provide for such powerful words. I'm not saying it's good, but it's good that you took your anger out on paper. Nice post... Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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