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How I feel Now (After my life became a mess)
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How I feel Now (After my life became a mess) |
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Ben Singleton Junior Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 18 |
It all feels weird When I get up each day I'm now single and free It feels good,in a way. I have no commitment I can do whatever I want I could swim with the fishes Or get tattoos on my front. But it aint all great I start thinking of you I listen to our song And look at photos too. I remember the times We had so much fun Remember the beach When we slept in the sun. I remember valentines day When I bought you that rose Took you to a restaurant You got cream on your nose. I remember the disco The first time we met We danced all night long But it weren't over yet. I took you to the cinema That night you looked your best We didn't know what to watch So we walked upto the desk You through back your hair Then you looked at the list I then took you in my arms That was the first time we kissed. But now were just friends Your with someone else no doubt I'm not bothered anymore That's how I fell now. </font> [This message has been edited by Ben Singleton (edited 05-23-2000).] |
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Haroon New Member
since 2000-05-23
Posts 7 |
How you doin Ben. This is a good poem, i liked it, I read some of your other stuff & found them all cool. Keep it up! |
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Ben Singleton Junior Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 18 |
Thanks, I've only just posted this and you've replied all ready, Cheers! |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a very good poem....how important it is to be able to move on. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Break-ups can be hard, I know, and the memories are always there. You describe this well. You have to remember that one of two things will happnen: Either you are meant to be and you will be together again someday, or you aren't meant to be and it's best that you are apart. Best of luck in the future! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
Ben, I really like this poem it flows we;;. Very nice Ben! Crystal "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive. Because when you love someone you control their version of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact, not their true situation at all." It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence. Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen. I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Hey! This is the first poem of yours that I have read so far, because I haven't gotten on the net much lately, but it's pretty awesome. I'd like it very muh if you would please read my poem. It's called Will You? Anyways, keep up the good work and keep writin' Allysa Loves may seem forgotten, but the true will once shine through. |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Wow...this is a really good poem about such a tough topic. I love the way you put it all together. Being that it seems your a new memeber and I haven't been here in a while...welcome to passions! Salma "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders." |
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