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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
When the rain comes and the sun no longer shines I always think of him... ...he is no longer mine. I have lost him somewhere probubly along the way I'll always love him though, What more can I say?? "Falling in love is just that - falling. Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe. Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees. But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die." |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Gone from your world, but not from your heart! Lots of expression in this poem you write. ~~nice writing~~ |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
thanks...although not one of my better poems i thought i should post this one in here rather than in the dark passions one...the one im used to...anyways thanks again for your comments...they are appreciated... ashley "Falling in love is just that - falling. Sometimes you merely trip and stub your toe. Sometimes you fall to your hands and knees. But sometimes you smack your head against the pavement and die." |
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