|Teen Poetry #2|
|In-between the lines|
since 1999-08-18Posts 1867
I planted stars, which FELL into my garden
IN fields of dreams, i searched for LOVE
AND I KEPT hope when faith has parted
and walked ON muddy roads that led above
and FALLING from the clouds onto pines
i wrote my story in-between the lines
"I will not whole die, my soul in sacred lyre,
will outlive my dust and will escape decay,
And in the moonlit sphere, my glory will not tire
As long as poets still remain" A. Pushkin
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since 2000-01-15Posts 2034
Master, this is very creative writing. Haven't seen anything like this before.
may try to do something like this myself.
since 1999-08-25Posts 176
I have to agree with Danny this is really creative writing. I love your stuff so keep up the good work.
"Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls."
since 1999-09-23Posts 322
I have to agree with both of them. It sure is very creative. It actually means something to me as well, you sometimes read something, or see something and it just emidiatly speaks to your heart in a way you don't always understand...this is what happened when I read this.
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