Sunshine, Doth Thy Decline?

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Teen Poetry #2

Sunshine, Doth Thy Decline?

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

0 posted 2000-05-19 03:36 AM

Sunshine , doth thou decline?

Thy sunshine doth decline?
Perhaps some hideous delusion set about in my mind?
Nothing to be so kind, not in the darkness of my mind.
No more sunshine, to illuminate my time.
Maybe some horrible crime to steal this sunshine?
Losing my friend, oh why always the kind?
Every day thy sunshine doth remind
Of the friend I lost, at the end of the line.

Piety me, oh angel of pain,
Claim my soul, before I am to shame
This maiming light, in my mind
Echoing through the blue sky’s melancholy decline
Sunshine hast drawn thy lines?
Never again to caress my dark mind?

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Ok this is a result of being up way to late, so to the younger memebers of this forum, get sleep, or you'll end up a lunatic just like me!!!!

Deranger, call me a little stranger, then the average mindless savage of the "Establishment" entrapsure.

TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

1 posted 2000-05-19 07:36 PM

I like it, I really like it a lot. It is diffirent (to me) and I think that is why I like it so much.

You really know how to write

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

2 posted 2000-05-20 12:08 PM

Thanks alot Tearsofpearls, this is a great departure from my standard and really need input.

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Spreading insanity, one post at a time

aussie_princesss
Junior Member

since 2000-05-17

Posts 15
Australia

3 posted 2000-05-22 07:10 PM

Sounds like me never sleep. always chatting.Good poem. love reading them.
Rhiannon

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