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Teen Poetry #2
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Jessica182
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since 2000-03-20
Posts 15
0 posted 2000-05-18 07:13 PM

Beautiful soul
unseen never discovered
the pain that was consumed
the layers of torment covered

I'll be the poison
that kills the darkness
that uncovers the beauty
and kills its lonleyness
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Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-05-19 11:58 AM

~~nice writing~~very expressive i feel!
dh
Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
2 posted 2000-05-20 07:23 PM

Hey, I don't unserstand y more ppl have not replied.. this is a brilliant poem.. so.. umm.. undescribable?? ^_^ Loved it..

Lynne
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