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Frosty Junior Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 17 |
Your emerald glittery eyes Sparkled in the moonlight You mocked losers And it was funny until You mocked me Yet I still loved you Now that your gone I cry at your grave And feel the words carved in stone that bare your name Your beautiful name I'll remember it forever Even when you didn't care about mine I could have sworn you loved me But fate never lies And I was wrong But when you cried for me I thought it was real Love is so deceiving |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Sorry dude, life sucks... But dont let it drag ya down, no one ever said life was easy, and i dont mean to insult you by suggesting you thought it was a easy raod to take, but i guess no one really gets the choice to start, only to end. Great poem, and no matter what any chich says, they can be just a cruel as guys can. But i guess you know that? |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I can relate to this poem very well... teasing is a million times worse when it comes from someone you love... and it still hurts when they leave, as you tell us beautifully. Your last line is so true... "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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