|Teen Poetry #2|
since 2000-05-15Posts 16
Gold spun thread
Glistening in the bright lights
Disguised and covered in the dark
The intricate pattern of weaves and knots
Has entangles me...captured me
I lay outstretched praying the
Smooth dark demon doesn't appear.
Praying he won't sink his fangs in...
Praying I won't have to look into the beady red eyes
I try to scream, but choke.
The spider has spun me with his thread.
I am covered in gold, but I can taste blood.
I am blinded by his survival.
I am weakened by his words.
And I am sickened by his touch.
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since 1999-06-16Posts 3850
In the space between moments
WOW! This is awesome! I loved the unique imagery, the idea of being entangled in a gold spun web, dreading the appearance of those pulsing red eyes...wonderful poem!
~We are only truly lost when we have lost ourselves~
since 2000-05-10Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there
One word ana, WOW!
Yes i agree, very unique imagery, extremely well written. Your skill is very impressive, i look forward to your future works!
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