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Ana Junior Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 16iLLINOIs |
Gold spun thread Glistening in the bright lights Disguised and covered in the dark The intricate pattern of weaves and knots Has entangles me...captured me I lay outstretched praying the Smooth dark demon doesn't appear. Praying he won't sink his fangs in... Praying I won't have to look into the beady red eyes I try to scream, but choke. The spider has spun me with his thread. I am covered in gold, but I can taste blood. I am blinded by his survival. I am weakened by his words. And I am sickened by his touch. |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
WOW! This is awesome! I loved the unique imagery, the idea of being entangled in a gold spun web, dreading the appearance of those pulsing red eyes...wonderful poem! *Krista Knutson* ~We are only truly lost when we have lost ourselves~ |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
One word ana, WOW! Yes i agree, very unique imagery, extremely well written. Your skill is very impressive, i look forward to your future works! |
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