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the dark angel Junior Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 37 |
As darkness surrounds me I long for his embrace He softly speaks my name causing my heart to pound and race His tender touch His soft embrace as his apple lips brush my waiting face My eyes slowly shut and I wait for just a taste but I realise he was a dream and he's gone left without a trace. |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
Dream love indeed! Nice work Dark Angel! This is strange, however, that there hasn't been any other replies...oh, well thier loss. Keep up the good work! Deranger |
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*~Juliet~* Junior Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 19Key West |
EXCELLENT POEM!!!!  I've been there many times, too...really great poem- I can't wait to read more of yours! |
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