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wesley
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since 2000-05-10
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0 posted 2000-05-10 04:20 PM


Bad Advice

You people see our love, get jealous and tell us it could never last
always compare our love by what you experienced in the past.

You call it puppy love you people must have short term memory
failed relationships only happened to you never happen to me.

If my relationship was up to you, you say that things would be a different way
you already had your chance, and were not your kids why wont you go away.  

So stay out of my life when it comes to love, I don’t need advice
from a lonely man, a man without a kid, a man without a wife.  



 

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Karen
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 36
Utah
1 posted 2000-05-10 05:34 PM


wow!  poetry is a perfect way to express your feelings.  And it is obvious that you have many that you need to express.  I agree, it's not fair for someone to tell you how to run your life or your relationships, but you can still listen to the advice, but you don't have to take it.  Welcome, and I hope to see more of you work!
Karen

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2 posted 2000-05-10 10:28 PM


Welcome to Passions! I hope you like it here. No one can tell you how to live your life, but sometimes you can get some good advice mixed in with all the bad. You have talent, and I hope to see more of you soon!

PS- Check your e-mail!

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

tawny
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since 2000-05-10
Posts 14

3 posted 2000-05-10 10:34 PM


understand how you feel, but don't be too quick to shove away the suggestions of others

must say though, you do get your point across clearly

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