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how love begins |
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the dark angel Junior Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 37 |
It sounds as soft as a prayer But cuts as sharp as a bullet It can take you places you've never been It could take yo places you'd never want to go But the choice is yours and when you're ready I'll be waiting To take you there |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
That is quite the invitation. I hope someone will take you up on it sometime. Love is a wonderful when it is real. Welcome to the family.  |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a wonderful description of the blossomings of love. I'll be looking for more! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Crystalina123 Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 228 |
Great poem, beautiful Crystal "The worst of what people do to one another is deceive. Because when you love someone you control their version of reality. If you lie to them that's like making them autistic so that what they believe is reality is in fact, not their true situation at all." It's not the angry words that break the heart, it's the silence. Someone said that true love is like a ghost -- often spoke of but never seen. I've seen both and yet in my darkest hours, tend to believe that neither exits. |
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