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Mackenzie New Member
since 2000-05-04
Posts 8 |
dark ugly lonely all alone cry out hope for one last dream dream for one last hope scream not heard lonely all alone dark ugly life |
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Daysleeper Member
since 2000-04-23
Posts 119 |
Damn... I hate it when that happens... See below. ...Daysleeper... [This message has been edited by Daysleeper (edited 05-09-2000).] |
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Daysleeper Member
since 2000-04-23
Posts 119 |
Mackenzie- Short, poignant and hard. Hard words, hard reality and hard to understand... Hard to understand in the sense of life's often mind-boggling cruelty. I hope this poem expresses one of your views on life, and not how you see life wholly. Good work, keep writing. ...Daysleeper... "Presently I've had enough of all your sanity." -James Kavanaugh |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
All to true these words of yours but there is also a brighter side. Good work.  |
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