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SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt Junior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 45 |
I want to tell you that I Love You,but I can't. I want to tell you that I Love You,but I won't.My Heart is too strong and my voice is too weak.* ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * I want to whisper "I Love You"into your ear.I want to whisper "I Love You" in the incoming years. It's hasn't been long,but of just a few short weeks. * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * So the best I can do is show my Love toward youEveryday and Every way.I Love You, I do, but this I will not say. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Hey, actions speak louder than words!! The one you love won't be able to help seeing your love if you keep showing it! Neat poem! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt Junior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 45 |
thanks for the responds Lizzie!!!!!!!! but you know it's harder to say then to do it!! truely i would be scared to death to go to the guy i love for so long and tell him that i love him and he might not respond the same way!! They might laph at me.. or they might think i'm crazy! you dont know if you dont try and truly i wont!! you never know the out come!! Maybe if i was in a long relationship w/someone that would be different!! well again thanks!! |
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Rachel8383 Junior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 44 |
actions do speak louder than words. its a great feeling isn't, love, i mean. if you don't feel comfortable telling him, i think its fine showing him. i really liked this poem though, keep it up. rachel |
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SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt Junior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 45 |
Rachel~ Thanks for the responds, hope i see your poems up, thanks again!! take care |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
this is so sweet! actions usually do speak louder than words, but words are pretty effective too though, especially when the words are 'i love you'  great poem i think everybody must go through this at some stage in their life Bets of luck woth your words and actions Bec  i never thought i'd die alone, i laughed the loudest who'd have known? i traced the cord back to the wall, no wonder it was never plugged in at all i took my time, i hurried up the choice was mine i didn't think enough I'm too depressed to go on, you'll be sorry when i'm gone I never conquered, rarely came 16 just held such better days Days when i still felt alive, we couldn't wait to get outside The world was wide, too late to try The tour was over i'd survived I couldn't wait till i got home, to pass the time in my room alone I never thought i'd die alone, another six months I'll be unknown Give all my things to my friends, you'll never set foot in my room again You'll close it off, board it up Remember the time i spilled the cup Of apple juice in the hall, please tell mum this is not her fault I never conquered, rarely came But tomorrow holds such better days Days when i can still feel alive, when i can't wait to get outside The world was wide, the time goes by The tour is over, i've survived I can't wait till i get home, to pass the time in my room alone 'Adam's Song' Blink 182 |
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SwEEt&iNnOcCeNt Junior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 45 |
BeC~ thanks for your responds on the topic! Yeah your right actions speek louder then words!! Man right now i wish i could tell the guy i like how i feel about him, but you know it to hard!! Well anyway thanks again bec!! talk to you later!! |
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