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Drifting Away |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Light dapples through entangled clouds Tumbling gently in a silver flow I wander upon a cleansing breeze A phantom within reality Golden threads are fraying Freedom floods upon feathered wings My soul is drifting away Melancholy sweetness blooms Like spicy fragrance from a rose Lost within the silence am I Yet somehow unafraid The deepest comfort found in me The binds have now broken That once held me here Like crystal sands I slip through your fingers And gently float away Alone is how I choose to be Gracing the lightly glittered sky For all of time Remember me, my cherished love, For I live in you. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
ASTOUNDING! |
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faith Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 89 |
That was so very beautiful.. I loved it  Keep writin like that ,always...helps one ease the pain faith[This message has been edited by faith (edited 03-02-2000).] |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
AWESOME ALWYE!! Glad to see some of your poetry here! stay cool  ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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Dusk Treader
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Beautiful poem Krista! I can't believe I almost let this one slip by... great imagery and writing. I really enjoyed this one! *Abrahm Simons* Put one foot on the path of life, tread the dagger's path betwixt dark and light. [This message has been edited by Dusk Treader (edited 03-02-2000).] |
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