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Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-05-05 03:42 PM


A moment is all it took,
Like the story from a book.

It was love at first sight,
From darkness into light.

The love that began to grow,
Is now beginning to show.

Just an innocent look,
His eyes were all it took.

It didn’t take long,
For love to grow strong.




 (if ya ever wanna chat, you can IM me on AOL: sexikitticat -or- pom16pom)


© Copyright 2000 Tamma M. Wilson - All Rights Reserved
snowgirl17
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1 posted 2000-05-05 10:59 PM


i LIKE IT GOOD JOB ON IT
Danny Holloway
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2 posted 2000-05-11 07:01 PM


Tamma, this is a nice poem.  Good expression and rhyme.
~~nice writing~~
thanks for the e-mail

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3 posted 2000-05-11 09:39 PM


Short but sweet!   I liked it a lot!

 "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde

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