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Puddles... (check this out for a smile) |
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Daysleeper Member
since 2000-04-23
Posts 119 |
Puddles: He said it was the biggest puddle, So I dared him to skip thru. Turns out it was the smallest lake, and the deepest too!  [This message has been edited by Daysleeper (edited 05-04-2000).] |
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Karen Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 36Utah |
I loved it, it was short, sweet, and it made me smile. |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
LOL! (:very cute   (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Very cute, Daysleeper! LOL ~Kristi Lynn |
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Daysleeper Member
since 2000-04-23
Posts 119 |
Thanks guys... glad it made you smile. ...Daysleeper... "Presently I've had enough of all your sanity." -James Kavanaugh |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
haha.. very nice! ^_^ I love this!! lol, this is so cute.. well done.. Lynne |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
hehehe this is so cute...it put a smile on my face lolBec i never thought i'd die alone, i laughed the loudest who'd have known? i traced the cord back to the wall, no wonder it was never plugged in at all i took my time, i hurried up the choice was mine i didn't think enough I'm too depressed to go on, you'll be sorry when i'm gone I never conquered, rarely came 16 just held such better days Days when i still felt alive, we couldn't wait to get outside The world was wide, too late to try The tour was over i'd survived I couldn't wait till i got home, to pass the time in my room alone I never thought i'd die alone, another six months I'll be unknown Give all my things to my friends, you'll never set foot in my room again You'll close it off, board it up Remember the time i spilled the cup Of apple juice in the hall, please tell mum this is not her fault I never conquered, rarely came But tomorrow holds such better days Days when i can still feel alive, when i can't wait to get outside The world was wide, the time goes by The tour is over, i've survived I can't wait till i get home, to pass the time in my room alone 'Adam's Song' Blink 182 |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Daysleeper~ Now this is sweet, thanks for the smile and the laugh! :> Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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