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Teen Poetry #2
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MrHat
Junior Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 34
Gilroy, Ca
0 posted 2000-05-03 12:47 PM

She is, alone
She feels, alone
She walks, alone
She fears, alone
She is alone
This loneliness consuming
Causing thoughts
Of suicide
Of homicide
Of everything between
Thoughts
Of jealousy
Of rage
Of violence soon foreseen
Piercing thoughts of dripping blood
Of evil flames bright burning
For a quick and painless death
Her lonely heart is yearning
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JennyeMeshan
Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA
1 posted 2000-05-03 12:52 PM

An All Around Great Poem! I can relate to the girl in the poem sometimes. I'm sure everyone can relate in one way or another to this poem. Very Very Beautiful Writing! Keep it up and I hope to see more soon! Stay Kewl!
-JennyeMeshan


 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child
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