Teen Poetry #2 |
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Same ol' song and dance |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Same ol' song and dance The edvince of a lost love. The star mourn your loss while the sun laughns at you. When in my heart did things break??? For when I look apon you I see something I wan t yet probually never have. Such irnory as I fall into dreppression. The touch, the sound, the life I just lost with a single goodbye. Yet I find hope in many things God being the main. So to tell a tale yet untold by me, Your eyes in which in them I gaze give me comfort. Because I see a love in which I want and yet have to fihgt for. For just to steal a kiss from you sweet cherry lips would place me into a state of heaven. Yet do denie the thing in which I search for would eventually destroy me. So now my sweet turtle dove I hope you understand I want nothing more than just to be with you. For when day turn to night I am still there The fallen angel jytree |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
This was awesome!!! The way you word your feelings and everything else is just great. This is a very beutiful poem. smiles ![]() ![]() |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
Great wording Keep it up ![]() (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
Wow! You did a wonderful job at wording this poem. It's obviously from the heart. Keep up the great work. Isa ![]() "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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son of man Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125 |
intense emotional setting. this poem truly must've come from the heart. |
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