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since 2000-01-26
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0 posted 2000-05-01 11:02 AM

Same ol' song and dance
The edvince of a lost love.

The star mourn your loss while the sun laughns at you.

When in my heart did things break???

For when I look apon you I see something I wan t yet probually never have.
Such irnory as I fall into dreppression.

The touch, the sound, the life I just lost with a single goodbye.

Yet I find hope in many things God being the main.

So to tell a tale yet untold by me,
Your eyes in which in them I gaze give me comfort.

Because I see a love in which I want and yet have to fihgt for.

For just to steal a kiss from you sweet cherry lips would place me into a state of heaven.

Yet do denie the thing in which I search for would eventually destroy me.

So now my sweet turtle dove I hope you understand I want nothing more than just to be with you.

 For when day turn to night I am still there
The fallen angel jytree

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since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada
1 posted 2000-05-01 03:36 PM

This was awesome!!! The way you word your feelings and everything else is just great. This is a very beutiful poem. smiles poe
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
2 posted 2000-05-01 05:31 PM

Great wording
Keep it up  

"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."

since 1999-08-25
Posts 176
3 posted 2000-05-01 09:44 PM

Wow! You did a wonderful job at wording this poem. It's obviously from the heart. Keep up the great work.


 "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls."

son of man
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125

4 posted 2000-05-02 03:27 AM

intense emotional setting. this poem truly must've come from the heart.


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