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JennyeMeshan
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since 2000-02-15
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Cecil, Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-05-01 01:41 AM


Distance between us increases,
The wind freezes me numb,
Wanting your warm kisses,
On these frozen lips you love,
I'm drowning in deep water,
I'm nothing without your love,
What happened to our happy ever after,
Our perfect love from the angels above.

Never let go of this heart,
Never let go of me,
Even though we are apart,
We have to prove we are meant to be,
With all my soul I still love you,
They ripped our hearts away,
But they haven't a clue,
How much it hurt that day.

There is an empty space,
In my soul unoccupied,
It's your old place,
That can't be denied,
Tears stream our cheeks,
Frozen to our faces,
Warmth of love we seek,
Of silks and laces.

Dark comes from light,
You turn into a shadow,
Yet you glow in the night,
You're all I know,
You're all I miss,
The hurt is painfully scratching,
Don't wanna feel like this,
As it heals it's itching,
And I am nothing without you, without you.



 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child


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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-05-01 08:51 AM


Whoa....what happened? Are you going to tell us the story behind this one? Last I read of you, you were blissfully in love with Nate...
The poem is very good, I can feel the pain in it and the longing. So please tell me what goes on behind it!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

JennyeMeshan
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA
2 posted 2000-05-01 01:24 PM


ESP-
This poem is about how I feel when I'm depressed. Nate and I are still going strong. I love him to death and I always will for the rest of my life. Thankx.
~JeNnYeMeShAn

 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child


JennyeMeshan
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA
3 posted 2000-05-03 12:27 PM


*NUDGGY NUDGGY!!*

 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child


ESP
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since 2000-01-25
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Floating gently on a cloud....
4 posted 2000-05-03 04:35 PM


Hey Jennye,

Glad you and Nate are going strong still!! Long may it last and much happiness may it bring!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
5 posted 2000-05-03 11:07 PM


Oh, wow! I can't imagine what you would be  writing if anything like this EVER happens to you. Nice work on this very powerful piece.
  :
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 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


JennyeMeshan
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 103
Cecil, Wisconsin USA
6 posted 2000-05-05 01:45 PM


Bump

 "If thou can wait then thou shall stay"
-Destiny's Child


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