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the pathway to nirvana |
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son of man Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125 |
like the raindrops on your cheek the sparkle of your eyes i keep tell me softly of your fears i'll kiss away your salty tears. not once bitten, still twice shy, fell to my death, in love did i die and went to heaven... [This message has been edited by son of man (edited 05-01-2000).] |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
This was very beutiful!!!!!keep writing!smiles  poe  |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
so gorgeous!! this is a lovely poem...keep up the great pieces!! Bec i never thought i'd die alone, i laughed the loudest who'd have known? i traced the cord back to the wall, no wonder it was never plugged in at all i took my time, i hurried up the choice was mine i didn't think enough I'm too depressed to go on, you'll be sorry when i'm gone I never conquered, rarely came 16 just held such better days Days when i still felt alive, we couldn't wait to get outside The world was wide, too late to try The tour was over i'd survived I couldn't wait till i got home, to pass the time in my room alone I never thought i'd die alone, another six months I'll be unknown Give all my things to my friends, you'll never set foot in my room again You'll close it off, board it up Remember the time i spilled the cup Of apple juice in the hall, please tell mum this is not her fault I never conquered, rarely came But tomorrow holds such better days Days when i can still feel alive, when i can't wait to get outside The world was wide, the time goes by The tour is over, i've survived I can't wait till i get home, to pass the time in my room alone 'Adam's Song' Blink 182 |
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Daysleeper Member
since 2000-04-23
Posts 119 |
Son of Man- Simple and breathtaking. The kind of poem you have to whisper under a tree... Just beautiful. ...Daysleeper... "Presently I've had enough of all your sanity." -James Kavanaugh |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Son of Man~ This is soooooooooo cool! I like it a lot. Looking forward to more from you. Love, Kristi Lynn |
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rachella Junior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 39Indiana |
This is good. I like the part "Kiss away your salty tears". I see that as total trust. |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
It's so sweet. I wonder if that says anything about you? When I read this I felt like crying. Keep up the good work. Isa "Poetry is the music of the souls, and above all, of great and feeling souls." ~Voltaire~ |
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lost soul Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 20 |
your poem was breathtakingly beatiful keep up the master pieces and i will keep reading, falling in love with you and your work more and more, handsome stranger*giggle* luv ya hugz and kisses |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
I REALLY like this one. It's awesome! Keep up the great work!  (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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purplesunshine Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 10 |
Darling, once again you wrote a beautiful poem. I know you have lots of poems to post on here.....so where are they? You are starting to get fans on here. Well my love you know you will always be my biggest fan. I love you! *Mandy* |
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purplesunshine Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 10 |
Oh I finally posted some of my stuff, you have already read them though. Love you bunches *Mandy* [This message has been edited by purplesunshine (edited 05-02-2000).] |
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NorthCaliGirl Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 14Durham, CA, 95938 |
Okay, I think I originally read this because it had the word "nirvana" in it, even though it has nothing to do with the band...  Anyway,... I think the poem was great. Keep up the good work, son.  No pun intended of course. NorthCaliGirl [This message has been edited by NorthCaliGirl (edited 05-04-2000).] |
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snowgirl17 Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 20Cloquet,Mn |
Intresting poem Great imagrey Lane C. |
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