|Teen Poetry #2
|mother oh mother....where did you go?
since 2000-04-30Posts 9
Mother Oh Mother...Where Did You Go?
My mom was always there
She explained what was fair.
She told me that she loved me
She said it's okay just to be me.
She said it was my choice in what to believe
She said she'd always have faith in me.
She said she'd always be here
To lend a listening ear.
Then one day she disappeared
She left a note that said one day she'd return.
That day was 10 yrs. ago
Now I have a mother I don't even know.
They told me her mind is bothered
Due to the acts of a horrible father.
In her heart she'll always mean well
But mentally she'll forever fail.
I thought it was my fault she left me
But it was the fate of mommy.
My mother said it was me she loved
I was her child, her "gift from above".
I love my mother with all my heart
Even though we're miles apart.
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since 1999-06-16Posts 3850
In the space between moments
Oh, so painful and so beautiful. You obviously have a lot of love for here. Welcome to passions and our wonderful little family!
"Lonliness is the human condition."
*Mark Twain, in the book "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"*
son of man
since 2000-04-25Posts 125
how sad, the way she left you like that.
i'm so glad you still love her though.
perhaps you will get to be with her again someday. i wish you well. good job.
since 2000-01-15Posts 2034
I thought this was very well written about your birthmother. Unfortunate that things like that happen. Your a daughter to be proud of. If she only knew!
since 2000-01-08Posts 4697
It always hurts to be abandoned, and I'm sorry for what happened to you. You have great talent, though. I hope to see more of your work soon!
"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
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