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| Teen Poetry #2 |
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broken dreams |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
I lay on the floor staring at the bare wall tears rolling down my face My heart is broken my broken dreams on the floor I see no point in life no more People show me they don't care no more that I don't matter to them anymore and everything in my life is falling apart People have stolen from me lied to me shafted me What is a real friend I still haven't found one yet every friend I've had leaves me for other people I've lost all trust in people no one matters to me anymore I can't care for anyone anymore My life seems better now without people no one to hurt me no one to make me cry But loneliness is making life worse now I feel un-loved not wanted and that my friends just don't love me anymore My friends use to be there for me no matter what but they've replaced me and left me in the dark I feel so alone with my broken dreams dreams I once had My dreams kept me going in life my dreams were everything to me but those dreams have faded like everything else My friends are gone my heart is broken all I'm left with now is my broken dreams. [This message has been edited by poe_32 (edited 04-30-2000).] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Oh Poe, what a miserable poem....I am sorry things aren't too good for you right now. Your Passions friends haven't forgotten you and we will always care about you. Email me anytime you wanna talk, ok? And don't give up on life or your dreams. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Thanks ESP, its good to know that there is people who do really care out there. Thanks for your reply! smiles Poe  |
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son of man Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125 |
hey man i know how you feel. this is a really great expression! you can email me too if you want. mooncricket17@hotmail.com just because your friends arent great people, doesnt mean youre not a cool person. i like poe, too. |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
Have you been talking about a friend or an old Love? Your poems are great. I like reading them because I can relate. I get teary eyed though...  (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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Oo0ostephanio0oO Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194Massachusetts ~USA~ |
Have you been writing about a friend or an old Love? Your poems are great. I like reading them because I can relate. I get teary eyed though... (:***Stephani***:) "A true friend will always stay a friend whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end." |
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