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poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada

0 posted 2000-04-29 09:34 PM


I lay on the floor
staring at the bare wall
tears rolling down my face

My heart is broken
my broken dreams on the floor
I see no point in life no more

People show me they don't care no more
that I don't matter to them anymore
and everything in my life is falling apart

People have stolen from me
lied to me
shafted me

What is a real friend
I still haven't found one yet
every friend I've had
leaves me for other people

I've lost all trust in people
no one matters to me anymore
I can't care for anyone anymore

My life seems better now without people
no one to hurt me
no one to make me cry

But loneliness is making life worse now
I feel un-loved
not wanted
and that my friends just don't love me anymore

My friends use to be there for me no matter what
but they've replaced me
and left me in the dark

I feel so alone
with my broken dreams
dreams I once had

My dreams kept me going in life
my dreams were everything to me
but those dreams have faded like everything else

My friends are gone
my heart is broken
all I'm left with now
is my broken dreams.

[This message has been edited by poe_32 (edited 04-30-2000).]

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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-04-30 06:58 AM


Oh Poe, what a miserable poem....I am sorry things aren't too good for you right now. Your Passions friends haven't forgotten you and we will always care about you. Email me anytime you wanna talk, ok? And don't give up on life or your dreams.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada
2 posted 2000-04-30 09:01 PM


Thanks ESP, its good to know that there is people who do really care out there. Thanks for your reply! smiles Poe
son of man
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since 2000-04-25
Posts 125

3 posted 2000-05-01 12:31 PM


hey man i know how you feel.
this is a really great expression!
you can email me too if you want. mooncricket17@hotmail.com
just because your friends arent great people, doesnt mean youre not a cool person.
i like poe, too.

 

Oo0ostephanio0oO
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since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
4 posted 2000-05-01 05:11 PM


Have you been talking about a friend or an old Love?

Your poems are great. I like reading them because I can relate. I get teary eyed though...


 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


Oo0ostephanio0oO
Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
5 posted 2000-05-01 05:11 PM


Have you been writing about a friend or an old Love?

Your poems are great. I like reading them because I can relate. I get teary eyed though...


 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


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