Teen Poetry #2 |
Time |
Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
Time has no beggining,and no end. It flies when one has fun, my friend. Time can heal all. Be it large or small. It can mend a broken heart, That completely fell apart. It can even heal the memories of you. Believe me wut I say is true. Thanx to time we shall all forgive and forget. And I know I won't regret Not having the memories of you. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Time is wonderful....if only there were more of it! Lovely poem! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Olga this is a lovely piece. I agree with Lizzie in that there isn't enough time that is why we have to take advantage of all the time that we already have. Nice job. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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MerritW Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 33Texas |
That's a really great poem. I agree with the time thing as well. There's never enough and there could never be too much. I loved your poem. Good job. Merrit *Love is the only thing that keeps me sane* (Sue Townsend) |
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Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
Thanx, I agree there isnt enought time, yet even with the time that there is, it can still work its magic wonders of healing. :P |
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snowgirl17 Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 20Cloquet,Mn |
Thanks for reminding expessicly me that time is time and it moves at it own pace. To heal a broken heart or a broken sprit. It is good to have this mind set and your poem demostates it very well! |
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Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
ur welcome! |
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