Teen Poetry #2 |
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Time |
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Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
Time has no beggining,and no end. It flies when one has fun, my friend. Time can heal all. Be it large or small. It can mend a broken heart, That completely fell apart. It can even heal the memories of you. Believe me wut I say is true. Thanx to time we shall all forgive and forget. And I know I won't regret Not having the memories of you. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Time is wonderful....if only there were more of it! Lovely poem! Love and hugs, Lizzie ![]() "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Olga this is a lovely piece. I agree with Lizzie in that there isn't enough time that is why we have to take advantage of all the time that we already have. Nice job. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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MerritW Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 33Texas |
That's a really great poem. I agree with the time thing as well. There's never enough and there could never be too much. I loved your poem. Good job. Merrit *Love is the only thing that keeps me sane* (Sue Townsend) |
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Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
Thanx, I agree there isnt enought time, yet even with the time that there is, it can still work its magic wonders of healing. :P |
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snowgirl17 Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 20Cloquet,Mn |
Thanks for reminding expessicly me that time is time and it moves at it own pace. To heal a broken heart or a broken sprit. It is good to have this mind set and your poem demostates it very well! |
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Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
ur welcome! |
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