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Blue Rose
Junior Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 18
Vernonia OR USA

0 posted 2000-04-24 05:08 PM


Stars fall like teardrops
From Heaven's wounded heart
Clouds blow over sunny skies
As you and I do part

Emotions flow like raging floods
Lightening flashes through our eyes
A dense fog of confusion
Covers normally sunny skies

Relationships, like weather patterns,
Are often hard to gauge
One day your heart is filled with love
The next a hateful rage

So don't be so anxious to say that you're in love
Because love, like the weather,
Comes from up above


© Copyright 2000 Rose Peets - All Rights Reserved
DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
1 posted 2000-04-24 06:00 PM


First and foremost, welcome to passions. Secondly, that poem is very beautiful, but alas, I'm in love   and very happy to be too  . Anyway, that is a very lovely poem, I like it.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

DaZeD&cOnFuSeD
Junior Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 32

2 posted 2000-04-24 06:57 PM


Good work!! I like that you associate love with the weather, good point of veiw its always changing... LOL
hope to see more from you!
DåzêÐ&CõñfûsëÐ
dana

Ashiraladoni
Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 52
Duluth, MN, USA
3 posted 2000-04-24 09:32 PM


A wonderful poem, Blue Rose, weater and love are a perfect pair. Ever changing, not always the same. Calm and peaceful like a summer's day and then turbulent as a thunderstorm. I can't wait to read more of your poems.

~Ashiraladoni

Olga
Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA
4 posted 2000-04-24 09:34 PM


Very nice poem. A lesson many ppl could learn!
UndyingLove
Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 23
Bethany, OK, USA
5 posted 2000-04-24 10:05 PM


Welcome!  I am a new member too!  But, I have to agree with DragonFang, I am in love too, and very happy to be.

 "Goodnight, sweet prince, and flights of angels guide thee to thy rest."
-William Shakespeare, in "Hamlet"

4eva_at_heart
Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238

6 posted 2000-04-24 11:40 PM


aha!
DragonFang and UndyingLove...i am with you there!
BLISS!

but love like weather can never be accurately forecast...so a storm could be just over the horizon
excellent post Blue Rose
Bec

 "whenever you are feeling alone...i'll take your hand in mine and we will walk together"


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