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Blue Rose Junior Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 18Vernonia OR USA |
Stars fall like teardrops From Heaven's wounded heart Clouds blow over sunny skies As you and I do part Emotions flow like raging floods Lightening flashes through our eyes A dense fog of confusion Covers normally sunny skies Relationships, like weather patterns, Are often hard to gauge One day your heart is filled with love The next a hateful rage So don't be so anxious to say that you're in love Because love, like the weather, Comes from up above |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
First and foremost, welcome to passions. Secondly, that poem is very beautiful, but alas, I'm in love  and very happy to be too  . Anyway, that is a very lovely poem, I like it."Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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DaZeD&cOnFuSeD Junior Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 32 |
Good work!! I like that you associate love with the weather, good point of veiw its always changing... LOL hope to see more from you! DåzêÐ&CõñfûsëÐ dana |
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Ashiraladoni Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 52Duluth, MN, USA |
A wonderful poem, Blue Rose, weater and love are a perfect pair. Ever changing, not always the same. Calm and peaceful like a summer's day and then turbulent as a thunderstorm. I can't wait to read more of your poems. ~Ashiraladoni |
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Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
Very nice poem. A lesson many ppl could learn! |
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UndyingLove Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 23Bethany, OK, USA |
Welcome! I am a new member too! But, I have to agree with DragonFang, I am in love too, and very happy to be. "Goodnight, sweet prince, and flights of angels guide thee to thy rest." -William Shakespeare, in "Hamlet" |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
aha! DragonFang and UndyingLove...i am with you there! BLISS! but love like weather can never be accurately forecast...so a storm could be just over the horizon excellent post Blue Rose Bec "whenever you are feeling alone...i'll take your hand in mine and we will walk together" |
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