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luvable New Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 9 |
I have fallen in love with you and i just don't know what to do I want so bad to tell you how I feel and tell you my love for you is real but i fear what your answer will be will you feel the same about me or will you say we should remain friends and expect my love for you to end I know not why i love you so but my feelings for you will just not go I have tried so hard to show you that my love for you is true but you just don't understand how much in love with you i am I have fallen for you but you still have no clue how much you really mean to me I just wish you could see that I have fallen in love with you and the love i have for you is true |
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Blue Rose Junior Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 18Vernonia OR USA |
I know how that feels. It took me for ever to finally tell my ex that I loved him, but when I finally did all of the waiting was worth it. Follow your heart, even if it doesn't work out, you'll be smarter because of it! Keep up the good work! |
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DaZeD&cOnFuSeD Junior Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 32 |
Great writing and rhythm... I like the poem!! DåzêÐ&CõñfûsëÐ dana |
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luvable New Member
since 2000-04-20
Posts 9 |
Thank you so much everyone for replying to my poem! I have just started writing mot to long ago and i never thought that people would actually like my poetry! Love always, Desiree |
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son of man Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125 |
heartfelt, your poem is easy to relate to. sometimes plain, clear imaging is all it takes to relay your feelings through poetry successfully, as displayed in this work. congratulations on a great poem! |
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