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Is She the One?
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Is She the One? |
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LadyWolf Junior Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 12 |
Is She the one that you wish to be with? Does she make it hard for you to concentrate? But now does it seem like she doesn't know what to do? You've just returned, and she's fully confused. Is she the one? Are you the one that makes her eyes light up with fire and passion or is there another? Would she tell you about her late night escapades or would she rather spare you the pain of knowing some one else tasted her lips? Is she really the one? Is she the one who makes you sweat and shake in your shoes? Or have you found another one to take the place of her? Tell her now how you feel, and she'll tell you what she feels. Cause she just maybe the one. On the Avenue of Life, don't forget to take the Taxi once in awhile. |
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MerritW Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 33Texas |
Wow!! That is really good! I'm glad I got to read it. Very good job. Merrit *Love is the only thing that keeps me sane* (Sue Townsend) |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
oh, that is a very nice poem. Yes, very nice indeed. Keep up the good work Wolf. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This piece nice piece that you have written Lady Wolf. I will look forward to reading more of your work. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Exellent advice! For if you don't say how you feel, you're forced to sit and wonder if that person really was the one and you missed your chance...lovely work, I enjoyed!  *Krista Knutson* As soon as man does not take his existence for granted, but beholds it as something unfathomably mysterious, thought begins. ~*Albert Schweitzer*~ |
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UndyingLove Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 23Bethany, OK, USA |
Great poem! I really needed that. I need to tell someone that he is the one, and reading this really helped me to see that! GREAT JOB! |
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