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Teen Poetry #2

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EvermoreMe
New Member

since 1999-12-13

Posts 3

0 posted 2000-04-21 08:47 PM

i'm here all alone
all alone sinking to the bottom
i scream and thrash
i thrash and scream
wanting you to be the one
the one to pull me up
pull me up to the surface
away from the hurt
away from the pain
away! away! away!
why aren't you here?
where did you go?
i'm still sinking
sinking down
i see it
i see the light
its the way out
i can't reach
grab my hand
get me out
i'm here all alone
all alone sinking to the bottom

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

1 posted 2000-04-21 11:38 PM

A VERY POWERFUL POEM!!
Congratualtaions, not many people can convey feelings that well.
You are very talented.
I felt captured while reading that. You did really well.

Love Always,
Shell.

NorthCaliGirl
Junior Member

since 2000-04-21

Posts 14
Durham, CA, 95938

2 posted 2000-04-21 11:41 PM

Okay, this poem I really like! It brings out a lot. Good job.

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