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since 2000-04-15
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0 posted 2000-04-17 07:32 PM

<font face="Times New Roman, Arial, Verdana" color="#871f78" size="2">Just sitting, staring at the blazing screen
words not being able to form from within
Where has my happiness gone?
The world is dark, cold, and unforgiving

Just sitting here, not knowing what to do
parents don't care what I say or do
I make my presence known with one simple

Just sitting here, watching the minutes
tick by with no reason why
What happen to that theory of no time?
I could read a book, but what joy would that
bring, reading someone else's sad trials and

No peace, no hope. Just sitting here with
nothing to do. I need to get out. Need to find
the keys. Need to find the sun and play

Going to go now, take the car, and the keys
and my American Express (cause I never leave
home without it) and leave for someplace else.

Now I'm not going to just sit here anymore.</font>

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since 2000-03-29
Posts 55

1 posted 2000-04-17 07:45 PM

Very expressive poem.Parents can be so uncaring.I'd love to see more of your work.

Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
2 posted 2000-04-19 05:49 PM

Hope it's a good trip....don't forget your seat belt.
Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 17
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2000-04-19 06:59 PM

I can totally relate... good stuff.


since 2000-03-31
Posts 162

4 posted 2000-04-19 08:00 PM

Wonderful piece here.
I can relate too.


Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
5 posted 2000-04-20 03:34 PM

Nice poem....hope life cheers up a bit for ya! Blue skies around the corner...

Love and hugs,

 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
6 posted 2000-04-20 10:52 PM

oh, very nice poem, I so relate to this. Good work, hope the trip is a fun one.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \
I am lost in my own mind.

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice
From what I've tasted of desire,
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great,
And would suffice.
-Robert Frost

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