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LadyWolf Junior Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 12 |
<font face="Times New Roman, Arial, Verdana" color="#871f78" size="2">Just sitting, staring at the blazing screen words not being able to form from within Where has my happiness gone? The world is dark, cold, and unforgiving Just sitting here, not knowing what to do parents don't care what I say or do I make my presence known with one simple "Ach-oo" Just sitting here, watching the minutes tick by with no reason why What happen to that theory of no time? I could read a book, but what joy would that bring, reading someone else's sad trials and tribulations? No peace, no hope. Just sitting here with nothing to do. I need to get out. Need to find the keys. Need to find the sun and play Going to go now, take the car, and the keys and my American Express (cause I never leave home without it) and leave for someplace else. Now I'm not going to just sit here anymore.</font> |
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heart_on_sleeve Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 55 |
Very expressive poem.Parents can be so uncaring.I'd love to see more of your work. Heart_on_sleeve  |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Hope it's a good trip....don't forget your seat belt. |
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Carly Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 17Michigan, USA |
I can totally relate... good stuff. ~Carly |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
Wonderful piece here. I can relate too. Lindsay  |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Nice poem....hope life cheers up a bit for ya! Blue skies around the corner... Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
oh, very nice poem, I so relate to this. Good work, hope the trip is a fun one. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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