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Under the Moon |
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LadyWolf Junior Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 12 |
Under the moon, standing with you watching the last seconds tick by Midnight comes and the age old tradition you kissed me gently in the cold dark night Under the moon, standing with you watching the sunset on a tropical isle We danced in the moonlight with passion and heat unlike any time before. Under the moon, without you I wonder where all the time went and what happened to us as I gaze up to the sky and wish for a miracle, I'm still just Under the moon without you. On the Avenue of Life, don't forget to take the Taxi once in awhile. |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Ah, that is sad. Very nice poem, but sad just the same. Anywho, keep on posting, I like your work. Samson C. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. Some say the world will end in fire, Some say in ice From what I've tasted of desire, I hold with those who favor fire. But if it had to perish twice, I think I know enough of hate To say that for destruction ice Is also great, And would suffice. -Robert Frost |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
This is nice, Ladywolf.. Lynne |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
This is sad. You did a good job though. Keep up the work. Isa  |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is lovely!!! I really enjoyed it. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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**Angel** Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 162 |
I love your poem. It is sad but it has wonderful expression in it. Keep posting! Lindsay |
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