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Teen Poetry #2

Sometimes

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

0 posted 2000-04-15 03:42 AM

At times things go great,
But often they don't.
Sometimes we can't control fate,
Or we just won't.

Sometimes, we fall in love.
Sometimes, we cry.
Sometimes, we live our life.
Sometimes, we die.

There maybe times when we seem to find love.
But it just slips away.
The times that we enjoy life,
Often don't stay.

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

1 posted 2000-04-15 06:23 AM

This poem is so true! Everything you said in here was so correct in relation to everybodies life. Nice job.

~AF~

"Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
Christopher Fry

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

2 posted 2000-04-15 02:20 PM

I agree with AF, nice writing.

A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives.

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

3 posted 2000-04-15 04:08 PM

Privet, nice to see you back here...

Isabelle
Member

since 1999-08-25

Posts 176
Indiana

4 posted 2000-04-15 10:27 PM

I agree with everyone else this poem is so true. I also think there is more you could possibly add. Keep up the good work.

Isa

Olga
Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 152
Brooklyn, NY, USA

5 posted 2000-04-16 11:01 PM

Thanx evryone,
P.S. Master, its nice 2 be back 2.

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