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Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
At times things go great, But often they don't. Sometimes we can't control fate, Or we just won't. Sometimes, we fall in love. Sometimes, we cry. Sometimes, we live our life. Sometimes, we die. There maybe times when we seem to find love. But it just slips away. The times that we enjoy life, Often don't stay. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This poem is so true! Everything you said in here was so correct in relation to everybodies life. Nice job. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
I agree with AF, nice writing. A life isn't significant except for its impact on other lives. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Privet, nice to see you back here... |
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Isabelle Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 176Indiana |
I agree with everyone else this poem is so true. I also think there is more you could possibly add. Keep up the good work. Isa  |
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Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
Thanx evryone, P.S. Master, its nice 2 be back 2. |
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