Teen Poetry #2 |
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Kevin![]()
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa ![]() |
its funny how when growing up we never think we are its always somehow years away still never very far. and years of tears and self seen smiles just pass as they unfold but when reflected back upon are seen as growing old. and in the end there’s nothing but the things you’ve taken hold for memories of memories keep us from getting old. some kisses will last forever some tears never run dry for when always in remembrance who can truly die? |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Bravo....Very true sediments here. |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Kevin, this is a very nice poem, especially the finishing lines. I haven't gotten around to reading your posts in open, I will try. ![]() LOL Marilyn, sediments? I believe those are small particles of dirt or sand- Perhaps you meant "sentiments" ![]() ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Ahhh Amy...you are right...*hanginf my head in shame*. I try so hard to do everything and my brain was exhausted yesterday when I posted here. My apologies...Spelling has always been my weakness. adore English...hate spelling and grammer...lol...and I want to be a writer!!..lmao. |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
wow! so true very nice ------------------ Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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JEBE Junior Member
since 1999-11-02
Posts 32WILMINGTON, NC, USA |
WOW...I love it and its so true. great work i look forward to reading more of your work. jebe |
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