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Teen Poetry #2

I need to tell you

AngelShell
Member

since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

0 posted 2000-04-15 01:31 AM

I need to tell you.

I need to tell you,
Before you walk out that door,
All the things that float through me head,
All the things that keep me up at night,
I need to tell you,
One more time,
How much I need your love,
How much I need your touch,
Those angel’s kisses that rest on my lips,
And stay for an eternity that seems to short,
I need to tell you,
All these things and more,
How much I love you,
How much I need you,
How much I long to be held once more by you,
No one can give me comfort as much as you,
No one can see me the way you do,
I need to tell you,
So that you’ll stay,
But my voices catches,
The words won’t come,
I need to tell you,
But you bow your head,
Smile secretly,
And walk out the door.

GAngel2212
Junior Member

since 2000-04-15

Posts 21

1 posted 2000-04-16 07:26 PM

I'm so honored to be your first repier!!!

) That piece of poetry was verry good and it had so much passion in it. I enjoyed all the emotions you pieced together in your poem. Very well done!

~GAngel2212~

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