|Teen Poetry #2|
|Used To Be|
since 2000-01-27Posts 271
Used To Be
Look at her and say what you see
Look at her and you won't see me
you'll see the brightest eyes
with love shining through
Diamond vase on her hand
Looking so shiny and new
Showing around vices of my heart
Pin me up with a poison dart
Spirit breaking through night and day
she took my heart and threw it away
Now i look at her
And i say what i see
I see a man where i used to be
--Written by: Hoppy
"Any fool can make a rule, and any fool will mind it."
Henry David Thoreau
Don't look... you might see.
Don't listen... you might hear.
Don't think... you might learn.
Don't walk... you might stumble.
Don't run... you might fall.
Don't make a decision... you might be wrong.
Don't live...you might die.
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since 2000-02-02Posts 2797
This is a good piece. Very vivd and passionate. Nice work hoppy.
"Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement."
since 2000-04-13Posts 1462
I agree with AF.. ^_^ good writing..
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