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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
Used To Be Look at her and say what you see Look at her and you won't see me you'll see the brightest eyes with love shining through Diamond vase on her hand Looking so shiny and new Showing around vices of my heart Pin me up with a poison dart Spirit breaking through night and day she took my heart and threw it away Now i look at her And i say what i see I see a man where i used to be --Written by: Hoppy 1-30-00 "Any fool can make a rule, and any fool will mind it." Henry David Thoreau Don't look... you might see. Don't listen... you might hear. Don't think... you might learn. Don't walk... you might stumble. Don't run... you might fall. Don't make a decision... you might be wrong. Don't live...you might die. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is a good piece. Very vivd and passionate. Nice work hoppy. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
I agree with AF.. ^_^ good writing.. Lynne |
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