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Chevy
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since 2000-04-10
Posts 6


0 posted 2000-04-11 12:35 PM


Ever get the feeling your not really here?
Your stuck somewhere far away
Just wanting to get home
Wanting to see them
thats how i feel
why?


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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-04-11 02:30 AM


I know what you mean, Chevy, but I don't know why. Life, I guess. This is a very good poem though.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


**Angel**
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since 2000-03-31
Posts 162

2 posted 2000-04-11 03:35 PM


Yes, I do get that feeling sometimes. It is strange isn't it? I cannot give you an answer for that one though!
Great poem..keep posting.
                        

Lindsay

natalie
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since 2000-04-02
Posts 56

3 posted 2000-04-11 03:43 PM


hard questions, nice poem
natalie...

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